Showing posts with label Pantheon. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Pantheon. Show all posts

Friday, October 5, 2012

Pantheon ch: 1 - Gaia

Black knew exactly what he was doing. Stealing wasn’t just about taking stuff. It was about keeping it.

“Anything good?”

“What?” Black jumped back, retracting his hand from a backpack that was not his.

“Did you find anything you like in there?”

Black had found something he liked, precisely what he was after. His fingers tightened around the slender bit of plastic The attached headphones dangled to the floor. In his other hand there was a small case for games and memory cards.

Every foster mom and volunteer rec-center dad he had lived with, knew he stole. As far back as his memory went. But they could never prove it.

“I...um…”

Being caught in the act was unthinkable.

 “Look kid, I’m not campus security. In fact I’d like to offer you a job.”

 “Wait, what?”

“I happen to be the world’s greatest smuggler.”

“You look like a bum.”

“I’ve pulled jobs that would make casino vaults look like candy stores run by a babies.”

“Look, if you’re not gonna-”

“No, I’m not going to call security or whatever.”

“Good, I’ll see you later then.”

“Actually you will. I need you to steal the sword of Hsin Lann.”

“The hell?”

Black stared. The man hardly looked like a professional thief. His hair was unkempt, his clothes ratty and he smelled disgusting. He was a cardboard sign-sob story.

“What if I told you that Earth has an identical twin, magic and mythology are real and I can teach you to steal from the gods themselves?”

 Black didn’t know how to react to that. But, in truth he didn’t care one way or the other. The man was obviously insane.

The student from whom he had stolen was returning. Black shook his head and made for the door. The stranger walked outside with him but turned to go a separate way.

“Be ready by nightfall.”

Safely inside a UNLV exhibition hall, away from stray bums, Black went over the conversation in his mind. He couldn’t get it out of his head. That guy was so weird. But a part of him wanted to believe the crazy dude anyway and abandon his life.

Black wanted out. He was sick of foster homes and boy’s ranches and their lame-assed “field trips” to cut rate campus exhibits. Black wondered why he hadn’t run away sooner. Free food and scarcity of cash were just excuses.

He could get by. Even tonight he would have taken the whole backpack, but anything that big was too hard to smuggle back to his current correctional facility. The PSP would have to do. Hopefully the careless co-ed had good taste in music.

Black could survive on the street, he had the know-how. He had the sticky fingers for it. He had once again confirmed that this evening. He conned the rest of the boys from his ranch to try and make it to the casino strip for some fun. Black never met them at the rendezvous spot. Instead he hit up the campus library and lifted backpacks. Like he would really go up against casino security, and try to gamble with stolen wallets and purses.

What use were some vacationer’s credit cards anyway? A few chips were nothing to him in the middle of a go-nowhere boys’ ranch compared to eighty gigabytes of memory sticks, loaded with free music, movies and games. Black couldn’t help laughing.

‘What were they thinking, allowing us to be taken on trips to the city?’ Thanks to that lapse in judgment though, he was enjoying his new toy. The headphones ran, under his shirt and hoodie. Black made sure his music was loud enough that he didn’t have to hear the adults discussing the dorm situation for the night and trying to discipline the other boys.

The commotion all around the young teenager couldn’t break his gaze out the high windows. Black was comfortably defiant, ignoring the mess he had caused. An arid, rainless tempest grew outside. Lightning flickered in through the window and bounced off the marble floors, casting twisted split-second shadows on the other delinquents as they were searched for contraband. From behind his black cheek-length hair he looked past the prison-like bars into the vacant sky.

Black wondered if he was close-by the place where he was once abandoned. At five years old Black was the victim of a doorbell-ditching at a Las Vegas City fire station. The only thing he had besides a pair of shorts was a note tied to his leg with scratchy twine.

“Keep alive.”

Dropping a half-naked toddler on a porch didn’t seem like a great way to keep him alive. All his life he wondered what kind of idiots would leave a note like that. And everyone who knew him since then, at some point, felt a hot desire to disobey the explicit command. In a sadistic sort of humor he would often wonder if his death would make his parents failures.

Las Vegas declared him Caucasian. He never understood what that meant. No one ever offered a straight answer when he asked where Caucasia was. Adults either scolded his attitude or chuckled and ruffled his pitch hair. By now he had stopped asking questions, but they were always there in the back of his mind. ‘Who am I? Where did I come from? Why was I abandoned?’

Then there were the big mysteries. ‘When’s my birthday? How old am I?’ Most importantly ‘why can’t I remember any of it?’ Still in his teens at least, he knew he should have memories of the fire station and before. The answers, like his parents, simply escaped him.

They gave him a name. He never used it. He went by Black. It was his favorite color and dress code. He liked it so much that he dyed his already black hair just to make it look deliberate.

 He was the black sheep of the lost Vegas boys. No foster family kept him. Valiant couples took him as a parenting challenge or divine project. The better that people got to know him, the more they tried to “help” him. It made him sick. Sooner or later he always bounced back to the state, and he preferred it that way, not that he liked the state, but Nevada nagged a lot less than would-be-mothers on a mission. Above all he didn’t like the feeling that he belonged anywhere. He needed to keep moving.

Leaning against a wall, he imagined a drunken homeless guy bursting through the doors trying to convince the disgruntled social workers to let him take a kid. Black envisioned the epic jailbreak it would require. ‘If he could do that, and avoid the cops, then maybe the hobo would be a decent smuggler.’

Again Black considered running away. ‘If the homeless guy could make it work…’

Black jumped away from the wall, back sweating. Half expecting to see that he had been standing against a broken radiator he saw the wall melt from the top down. He gawked as the stranger stood alone in the opening. The storm was blowing his stringy hair around the edges of a hood. A black coat ran to his knees. He wore tall boots and his hands were bandaged.

Black scowled. “I think there’s been a misunderstanding. I was expecting a professional thief, not some cirque du sideshow.”

The sunken-faced man peeled himself back from the opening, offended.

“The con-artists of your world-” He cut himself off. “I don’t have to prove anything to you. Stay here if you want. I hear you enjoy digging latrines over at that delinquent labor camp.”

‘Finally’ Black thought, ‘someone real.’ The stranger bore no façade, he had no intentions to candy coat the world for Black’s sake. It seemed as good a time as ever to run away. None of the state workers would miss him. They would just miss their jobs. Isn’t that what unemployment was for?

The possibility taunted him. Even after seeing the wall boil down into nothing, the prospect of finally getting out was more real to him now than it had ever been.

The stranger beckoned with a follow-me motion and turned towards the night.

Black didn’t trust him, but he had never trusted anyone in his entire life. Why start now? Besides, whatever might happen, this beat the alternative.

Coping with the shock over what had just happened, Black envisioned walls melting all over the world. Glass display cases, vault doors and even prison bars in his mind disappeared effortlessly with each imagined caper.

 “Ah, what the hell.”

 The air was filled with a cool storm breeze. Though lightning flashed the sky, still no rain fell in the city, there was only wind and shadow. As they tore away from the exhibit hall, Black saw the wall close up as if nothing had happened. That was the night he disappeared.

Black left behind his “Camp Fix-me” duffel, hoping to leave the impression that he simply vanished. He wanted them to wonder why he didn’t take anything with him. Having just shown up one day, now he was gone.

They had gotten off the main roads, out of sight from the bright lights and traversed seedier alleyways and derelict parking lots. Descending into the deep shoulder of a freeway underpass, the rushing of sixteen wheelers on a four lane highway wrenched him back into reality. They stepped down into the ditch stopping at a metal grating guarding a drainage hole. The man’s touch melted it. He grabbed Black’s arm and pulled him to the hole.

“Get in!”

“Yeah right.”

“Do it or I’ll stuff you down myself.”

Black nearly pulled out his knife but his better judgment took over and he cautiously climbed in. He was no match for a wall melter and whatever else this stranger was, nor did Black think it wise, presently, to find out. Too soon, his feet hit a splashy ground that he didn’t know was coming. But, he only fell to one knee.

“Not bad kid. A natural faller. You might add up to something.”

“Thanks?” Black paused, “What’s your name anyway?”

“Yuki. I guess you’re going to hear it sooner or later.” It was a meager offering.

After a little walk in pure darkness, being pushed from behind by Yuki, Black saw a bright flash and felt a sharp pain in his head. He didn’t realize what had happened. There weren’t enough seconds between he the floor to find out. Black was unconscious before his body fell.



Black became aware of a sewer-like stench. As he grew more alert, he noticed he was wet, lying in rancid water next to a set of wide steps. His eyes adjusted to the dim light emanating from something above him. The surroundings were unrecognizable. Black looked around, trying not to seem awake.

Soon the darkness beyond the steps became an archway and there appeared a light. It was jagged and incomplete, obstructed by whatever contained it. As the light drew nearer it grew a pair of arms and then a body. Someone was holding a bright object in the palm of their hand. ‘Son of a bitch!’

“Sorry kid, it was necessary, would have been mounds of trouble. We’re here now so get up.”
As Black got to his feet he opened his mouth but was cut off.

“Just shut up and listen. I need to know everything you have on you, down to every little hairpin and piece of string. Put it on the table or it’ll be your head.”

“What?”

“Don’t make me ask again.”

Black started emptying his pockets.

“Everything!” Yuki barked.

There wasn’t much, a utility knife, a little cash and a lighter. Black wasn’t about to hand over the new mp3 player he had just recently adopted.

“If that’s not everything you’ll be dead or in prison in less than an hour, and believe me you won’t like this sort of prison.”

Black subdued his nerves.

“Do you have any necklaces or jewelry?”

“No.”

“No piercings?”

A ring and a bar went from his lip and tongue to the table.

“Happy?”

“Don’t get smart, runt.” Yuki set a glow-in-the-dark rock on the table and reached into his coat, pulling out a small black and brown box with a square hole in one end. He held it so the hole faced outwards and touched the hole-side of the box to the knife. It melted and disappeared. Then the piercings.

Yuki used the lighter to burn the cash. Then crushed it underneath his shoes and tossed it aside.
Black stood with a protest deep in his throat.

“No more questions squirt?”

Black dared, opening his mouth-

“Good, stay shut up, you’ll live longer.”

“No,” Black complained, “I need information. Choose what you’re going to tell me, it won’t matter what I ask, but you’re telling me something before you or I make another move.”

With a wide grin Yuki retorted, almost sinisterly. “Ok kid, you’ve earned it, but keep your shorts on. I work in a little different line of smuggling than you think. This is a border unlike any you’ve ever seen, and I always have plenty of tricks up my sleeve. This box is a smuggler’s hole. It can store huge amounts of just about anything, even someone unconscious. How’s your head by the way?”

“You put me in…that’s-“

“That’s what, impossible? Or magic? I told you it was real.” With that Yuki touched the side of the box, stroked the corner, closed his eyes, and pulled a three foot long sword out of the box.

“This, once belonged to a man named Gilgamesh.” His proud announcement was met with a blank stare. “Don’t know your history, eh?” He traced the box, closed his eyes, and pulled out “something you might have heard of, the staff of Merlin. And this,” he boasted as he pulled a third time, “is the helm of Hades, worn and lost by Perseus.”

Something about the last item felt familiar but the name to which the staff belonged, he knew. “So what?”

“So what?” Yuki repeated in disbelief. “These artifacts are hundreds of years old and worth a fortune. I told you I’m the world’s greatest smuggler. This box can hold just about anything you want. I put you in there.”

“So where are we going?”

“I’ve already told you.”

He didn’t actually believe there was some other world did he? What did he say it was, an identical twin to earth? ‘Doesn’t make any sense.’

But, Black knew when to quit. Questions got people like him into trouble, not authority trouble but trouble with trouble itself.

Ignoring Black, Yuki  stared at the box for a minute or two then jammed two of his fingers in the hole. While saying something under his breath the box began to melt. Yuki pulled his fingers apart and turned the box inside out. Then he clapped his hands together around the box. There was an absorbing silence that followed and he opened his hands to show nothing but air, like a magic card trick when the card ended up in your sleeve.

“Reversed the magic. Put the box in my hands. Painful,” Yuki winced, “but they’ll never find it.”

Black saw a deep red smear on the palm of Yuki’s hand. Curious, he looked at the other hand and saw blood seeping out of a cut so deep he expected to see through to the back of the hand. Pulling long strands of cloth from his pockets, Yuki dressed the wound like it was an involuntary response.

 ‘Ok this guy gets some credit,’ he applauded mentally, jaw gaping. He was growing more convinced of all the crazy stuff Yuki had said before about magic and mythology.

 “Great marring,” Yuki continued, “will stand out under the Aigian lights.”

“The what?”

“Aigian lights, named after the shield of Zeus, the aigis. It means protection. Think of the lights as magical x-ray scanners. You’ll see what I mean. Come on.”

He pointed at some heavy metal doors on the sides of the walls. “Almost nothing of this world can be taken to the other, vice versa. I take what I want where I want.” With that Yuki went over to a chest next to some lockers opened it and started rummaging.

“You still think I’m going to believe this other world stuff?”

“Believe what you want. Here put these on.” Yuki held a bundle of interesting looking cloth.

“No way!”

“You’ll wish you did.”

“Yeah, I’m sure.”

“Alright kid,” Yuki chuckled. “You know best. Come on, time to go.”

Friday, April 27, 2012

Pantheon: Ch 1 - Gaia (old not so final "final draft")

hey, thanks for clicking. this is Chapter 1 of my newly finished novel. this is the most recent re-write and im looking for some final feedback on it as i am getting ready to send the project to agencies. I appreciate your feedback and time. Thanks, hope you enjoy!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nD--zdQYFDcYj_grWqvAlfbsx8270yxFBro4onYUUJM/edit?pli=1

thats a link to googledocs..but here it is below as well


Pantheon
By Nathan Croft

Chapter One: Gaia

‘Keep alive,’ the orphan came with instructions. At five years old Richard was left on the porch as someone doorbell-ditched a Las Vegas City fire station. Everyone who knew him since then, at some point, felt a hot desire to disobey the explicit command.

~

Commotion all around the young teenager couldn’t touch his meditative gaze out the high museum windows. He was comfortably defiant, ignoring the mess he had caused. An arid, rainless tempest flickered in through the window and bounced off the marble floors, casting twisted split-second shadows on the other delinquents as they were searched for contraband. From behind his black cheek-length hair Richard looked past the prison-like bars into the vacant sky. He was waiting for the stranger.

‘Keep alive.’ All his life he wondered what kind of people would leave a note like that. ‘Weird old idiots!’ Despite his unknown parentage the city declared Richard to be Caucasian. He never understood what that meant. No one ever offered a straight answer when he asked where Caucasia was. Adults either scolded his attitude or chuckled and ruffled his pitch hair. By now he had stopped asking questions, but they were always there in the back of his mind. Who was he? Where did he come from? Why was he just abandoned? Most importantly why couldn’t he remember? At fourteen or fifteen he knew he should still have memories of the fire station and before. The answers, like his parents, simply escaped him.

There were only the scattered mental images of constant migration between boy’s ranches and foster homes. Especially unhappy at his current middle-of-nowhere slave labor camp, he considered running away, but it was way too far outside of the city to make it anywhere safely. He hated the remoteness of the place and there were far too few people there. It was easier to cope with being alone in a crowd than to feel like a sore thumb on a guy with one hand. Thankful for the short field trip he was currently watching the windows of some smelly moth-ball museum in the heart of Las Vegas. Right on campus at UNLV, he wondered if it was close-by, the fire station at which he was abandoned.

Repressing disgust for the various exhibits and displays around him, Richard had made himself comfortable in a corner with a particularly nice stone wall on which to lean. Concealing perfectly, coupled with his new hooded sweatshirt, his tan face and the surprisingly snug headphones. He made sure his music was loud enough that he didn’t have to hear the adults arguing.

“Have you questioned Rich-“

“A million and a half times. He said they mentioned the strip but no one will rat him out.”

“Richard had to have had something to do with it. When we get back, those kids are in huge trouble.”

“There’s no way we can make it back in this weather.”

“Yes we can, it’s not even raining and the news reports-”

“But if it starts, the road will be too muddy for this bus and since when has the news ever been right?”

“What are you saying, that we spend the night here?”

“If it comes to it, with the boys and all I’d rather spend the night here than stuck on some dirt road halfway to the ranch.”

The adults’ argument was masked by screeching guitars, drums, and the latest electronic bleeps.

Richard, that was what they named him. Sometimes, the more annoying tried their luck with Richie, but anyone who knew better called him Black. The children often used made up names. It was his favorite color, his dress code and coincidentally his hair was as dark as a moonless midnight. He liked it so much that he went so far as to dye his already black hair just to make it look deliberate.

Black was both Richard’s title and surname as he saw it. He was the black sheep of the lost Vegas boys. No foster family kept him. Valiant couples saw Black as a parenting challenge or as their divine project. Embracing rejection, he never let them tame him. Although he liked the foster homes best, he got sick of them quickly. Sooner or later he always bounced back to the state, and he preferred it that way, not that he liked the state itself, but Nevada nags a lot less than would-be-mothers on a mission. The better they got to know him the more they tried to “help” him. Above all he didn’t like the feeling that he belonged anywhere. He needed to keep moving.

Standing in the corner ignoring the world around him he was simply indifferent like nothing affected him. He thought of himself as a shadow, only frightening if you fear it. Patient and tactful, he was only cutthroat if provoked.

Black turned back towards the window. Tonight was the night he was leaving. He wondered why he hadn’t done it sooner. Free food and scarcity of cash were just excuses. But now he had met someone, someone different from the regular runaway or criminal. This one was smarter.  Richard felt somehow he wouldn’t get killed or caught with him. He continued to watch the window.

Outside, the flash and bangs worsened. It was still dry in the city but the chaperones had no choice but to stay at the museum for the night. The intensified lightning helped Black keep alert, now sitting against a wall in the designated corner of the museum’s entrance hall. Black stayed in that corner all night, after all they boys had returned and been scolded, even after everyone was asleep.

The museum was quiet, closed under care of security guards. Richard didn’t know how the stranger would come, but if he could it would serve as the proof that the stranger was telling the truth. With reservation, Black envisioned the epic jailbreak it would require, but the man seemed to know exactly how he would do it. It was all the same to him, he wasn’t going to challenge. Questions got people like him into trouble, not authority trouble but trouble with trouble itself.

Black waited for what only seemed like a few minutes, but could have been hours. He was too indifferent for time to get to him.

The moment finally came, quietly, unnoticed. The wall behind him began to grow warmer, steadily under the cover of the storm’s humidity. Black shot up to his feet, back sweating. Half expecting to see that he had been sitting against a broken radiator he stepped away annoyed. Looking back, unflinching he stifled disbelief as a section of wall appeared to melt before his eyes. No one seemed to notice as a stranger stood alone in the opening, hair blowing on the edges of a hood. A black coat ran to the strangers’ knees.

“I think there’s been a misunderstanding. I was expecting a professional thief, not some cirque du sideshow.”

The sunken-faced man peeled himself back from the opening, offended.

“The con-artists of your world-” He cut himself off. “I don’t have to prove anything to you. Stay here if you want. I hear you enjoy digging latrines over at that delinquent labor camp.”

Black didn’t trust this guy of course, but he had never trusted anyone in his entire life. Why start now? And whatever might happen sure seemed to beat the alternative.

“Alright, let’s do this!”

The stranger beckoned with a follow-me motion and turned towards the night. The air was filled with a cool storm breeze. Though lightning flashed the sky, still no rain fell in the city, there was only wind and shadow. As they strolled away from the outer walls of the museum, Black saw the wall close up as if nothing had happened. To the rest of the world, that was the night Black disappeared.

Richard left all of his things in his backpack, even a few things he had stolen that looked valuable, he wanted to leave the impression that he simply vanished. He wanted them to wonder why he didn’t take anything with him. He thought about a suicide note but it seemed to him a mystery, the unknown, was more fitting. He just showed up one day and now he was simply gone.

Before returning to that museum that evening, just in case he was searched, he had stashed some of his other newly acquired goods in a hollow tree close by. Wanting to get them he asked the stranger.

“Shut your mouth. You can’t take it where we’re going anyway, and as much as I like practicing my English I’d rather you just shut up.” That seemed to be the end of the conversation.

It was all the same to Black. He was now envisioning walls melting all over the world. Glass display cases, vault doors and even prison bars in his mind disappeared effortlessly with each new imagined caper.

Descending into the deep shoulder of a freeway underpass, the rushing of sixteen wheelers on a four lane highway fazed him back into reality. They stepped down into the ditch stopping at a metal grating guarding a drainage hole. The stranger touched it and it too melted. Black’s arm was grabbed and he was pulled to the hole.

“Get in!”

“Yeah right.”

“Do it or I’ll stuff you down myself.”

Black nearly pulled out his knife but his better judgment took over and he cautiously climbed in. He was no match for a wall melter and whatever else the stranger was, nor did Black think it wise to find out presently. His feet hit a splashy ground that he didn’t know was coming. He landed too soon but still only fell to one knee.

“Not bad kid. A natural faller. You might add up to something.”

“Thanks uh,” Black paused, “What’s your name anyway?”

“I guess you’re going to hear it sooner or later,” the slender man consented. “The name’s Yuki.” A meager offering. He pressed onward.

After a little walk in pure darkness being pushed from behind by Yuki, Black saw a bright flash and instantly felt a sharp pain in his head. He didn’t realize what had happened, nor were there enough seconds between his rapidly falling body and the floor to find out. He was totally unconscious before he even landed.

As if he were dreaming, the evening’s events replayed in his subconscious. He was back in the museum. The still distant storm echoed in the empty halls. They boys were given some free time to wander the museum at their leisure after dinner. Black had conned the other boys’ ranch inmates into running off to the strip during this reprise form supervision to test their luck on slots and cards. He had convinced them that all the fun there was to be had on the Vegas strip would outweigh whatever punishment the staff could come up with. Also he assured them vigorously that once all was said and done, after they had paid the small price in the form of extra manual labor, they would have a trove of smuggled-in contraband. Videogames.

The other delinquents may not have trusted Black, but when he said he could get something in, he meant it. Frankly, videogames appealed to everyone there. Whether or not your style was headshots and claymores, shouting dragons from the sky, endless worlds made of pixilated blocks, zombies, or motion sensor sports, Black was your man. They used to have several handhelds and an outdated console. That was before the great confiscation following Christmas last year. It was high time Black upped the ante.

They had to leave in waves so as not to raise any alarms but Black never had any intention of meeting them at the rendezvous point. Each boy boasted of their future game and glory as they waited for Richard, as promised, at the rendezvous point. Instead with a perfect diversion, he had made his way to the nearby campus to lift electronics off careless coeds and lazy bachelors.

That was the pivotal point in his plan. Get everyone else lost and eventually caught, he would appear to have never left the museum, oblivious to everyone else’s absence. He would pretend to have had some artistic epiphany over some sculpture, or painting or some other crap. That would get their hopes up. Of course he would have to corrupt whatever bogus insights he had with some morbid twist, just for credibility. ‘Maybe there is hope for Richard after all, if we can just get past the psychosis.’

Black wasn’t really psychotic, he was clever. Maybe there was a fine line between them. ‘Well, whatever works.’ All of his peers would take the heat while he became the hero, loaded with hours of against-the-rules electronic entertainment.

The return of the other boys cued Black’s volume finger. Drowning out the scene, his music blasted louder than before. He kept the best piece of course for himself, headphones under his shirt and in his hood, out of sight from the ever-searching eyes of the institution. Black did regret that he had not seen their frantic faces when they fruitlessly searched for the escapees on the strip.

The mental movie played out in his mind, the boys found the strip and no Black. They would look for hours before getting caught by angry social workers and dragged back to the museum. Their play time utterly wasted, they were now being tried and sentenced. He had sold them out and in the end they would praise him for it. He would just shrug. He kept the volume up. The mental movie was good enough, and providentially the PSP was absolutely loaded. Most of it was even pretty good.

He smirked as the shaky hand of part-time justice dealt with the other delinquents. After the public reprimand the group was admonished to “go one last time.” It had grown late, and the storm near. There was no chance they could get the massive busses back to the distant ranch in this weather. It still wasn’t raining in the city, but via cell phone the staff was warned that it came down in droves all along the dirt roads leading to the camp. Black continued leaning like a lazy sentinel as the rest of the crew filtered in and out of the bathroom, his legs crossed and arms folded. Some other boys approached him, curious to know of his exploits.

“Dude, they think I’ve been here the whole time. Go away or they’ll figure it out.”

“But”

“Piss off!”

With a particular gesture of his hand Black ushered the other barterer away. In truth, for the first time, he wasn’t able to obtain the requested goods, not all of it anyway. Distracted during his collection run, a skinny long haired and scruffy man at the university had caught him rummaging through backpacks. Instead of capture, the man had approached Black and offered change which he readily accepted.  Life off the grid, and a chance to learn professional thievery, packaged with the promise of never getting caught, ultimate freedom was all the enticing he needed to agree. So he just gave up on lifting small time gadgets, he didn’t even bother finding the freshman dorms. He just took what he had already nicked and went back to the museum even earlier than he had to.

It was late and dark outside. The chaperones scurried about in a worried frenzy over a few missing delinquents and the impending storm. Richard couldn’t help but laugh. He, the alleged “Ring Leader” of the nonconformists, had just been honored for his current presence. Richard smirked again. The other boys hardly pulled a penny slot and he had a brand new PSP playing music in his pocket. As if he was really going to go up against casino security, trying to gamble with stolen wallets and purses. What use were some vacationer’s credit cards anyway? A few chips were nothing to him in the middle of a go-nowhere boys’ ranch compared to eighty gigabytes of memory sticks, loaded with free music, movies and games, courtesy of some unattended backpacks at the nearby computer lab.

Eventually everything had died down and he sat in a corner, against a wall and waited. He must have fallen asleep, because now he was waking up. It wasn’t completely dark but his eyes still hadn’t adjusted. Stupid stranger wasn’t coming. Or wait, he had. ‘No,’ he thought, ‘that was a dream.’

He became suddenly aware of a sewer-like stench. ‘Who farted?’ But as he became more alert he noticed he was wet. He had been lying in some rancid water next to a set of short wide steps. His eyes adjusted to the dim light emanating from something above him, his surroundings were unrecognizable. He started to look around trying not to seem awake.

Soon the darkness past the steps became an archway and there appeared a light. It was jagged and incomplete, obstructed by whatever contained it. As the light drew nearer it grew a pair of arms and then a body, someone was holding a bright object in the palm of their hand. ‘Yuki that backstabber!’

“Sorry kid, it was necessary, would have been mounds of trouble. We’re there now so get up.”

As Black got to his feet he opened his mouth but was cut off.

“Just shut up and listen. I need to know everything you have on you, down to every little hairpin and piece of string. Put it on the table or it’ll be your head.”

“What the-“

“Do it now and don’t make me ask again.”

Black started emptying his pockets and Yuki barked “Everything.”  He didn’t have much, a small stiletto and a big hunting knife. There was a little utility piece that consisted of a miniature compass and a lock pick and a few other little pocket knife type tools. There was a little cash and a lighter. Black wasn’t about to hand over the new mp3 player he had just recently adopted.

“If that’s not everything you’ll be dead or in prison in less than an hour, and believe me you won’t like this sort of prison.”

Black subdued a few nerves that started to perk up, having kept his mp3 player from Yuki’s grasp. A few seconds pause, but minutes calmer, he pulled off his left shoe. He took out the insole and then withdrew a thin piece of metal with a nasty spike on the end. There were a few holes in the piece, a skinny pair of steel knuckles. A butterfly knife came from the hollow sole his right shoe.

“Do you have any necklaces or jewelry?”

“No.”

“Really? No piercings?”

A ring and a bar went from his lip and tongue to the table.

“Happy?”

“Don’t get smart, ant.” Yuki smirked as he pulled something out of a coat pocket. It was a small black and brown box with a square hole in one end. He held it so that the hole faced outwards and took few steps over to the table. Light in one hand, box in the other, he lowered them both to the table. Yuki touched the hole-side of the box to the first knife, the stiletto. It melted and disappeared, then the butterfly. Everything Black had melted and disappeared until the large hunting knife was the only thing on the table. “This is ugly, besides it won’t be much good to you anymore.”

Black stood there with a protest deep in his throat. Not knowing what to say as Yuki seemed to materialize a white chalky disc from nowhere. Yuki picked up the knife and tapped it to the disc. The blade turned to dust and was sucked into the disc. Black stood in awe, that disk was solid no mistake, yet it sucked the dust into it.

“No more questions squirt?”

Black dared, opening his mouth-

“Good, stay shut up, you’ll live longer.”

“No,” Black complained, “I need some information. You choose what you’re going to tell me, it won’t matter what I ask, but you tell me something before you or I make another move.”

With a wide grin Yuki retorted almost sinisterly, “Ok kid, you’ve earned it, but keep your shorts on. I work in a little different line of smuggling than you think. This is a border unlike any you’ve ever seen, and I always have plenty of tricks up my sleeve. This box is a smugglers hole. It can store huge amounts of just about anything, even someone unconscious. How’s your head by the way?”

“You put me…that’s-“

“That’s what, impossible? Or magic? Ha, kid, keep your eyes open.” With that Yuki touched the side of the box, stroked the corner, closed his eyes, and pulled a three foot long sword out of the box. “This, my friend, once belonged to a man named Gilgamesh,” his proud announcement was met with a blank stare. “Don’t know your history eh?” He traced the box, and closing his eyes Yuki then pulled out “something you might have heard of, the staff of Merlin. And this,” he boasted as he pulled a third time, “is the helm of Hades, worn and lost by Perseus.”

Something about the last item rang a bell but the name to which the staff belonged he knew. “So what?”

“So what?” Yuki repeated in disbelief. “These artifacts are hundreds of years old and worth a fortune, but the point is this box can hold just about anything you want. I put you in there. On our way down here in the tunnels I heard voices. There’s never any way to know who a voice in the dark belongs to so I stuffed you in here. It’s easier to defend myself alone, and smuggling extremely rare and expensive artifacts requires serious skill, especially where we’re going, so I don’t need you screwing it up!”

“So where are we going?”

“Nowhere that you would believe. Now, it’s easy to hide anything in the box. It’s the box itself that takes some effort in hiding. There’s a few ways to do it, you can make it appear to be something it’s not.” He illustrated, somehow turning the box into a scarf.  “It doesn’t always last long and there are rarely any options since you can’t take anything with you to this place.” The scarf turned back to a box. “Clothing is a number one suspect for hiding things by the way, so it won’t work here. Or you can try to dilute it into the air,” he did not demonstrate, “an easy thing to do but very unreliable. The chances of finding it are slim, the chances of being able to get it back are slim, and the chances of it being detected are not so slim, but the feat is the easiest to perform.

“A third option, my personal preference; reversing the magic of the box on itself, much the same as melting it into air but a little more specific. With a little magical skill and tolerance for pain you can melt it into yourself.” He stared at the box for a minute or two then jammed two of his fingers in the hole. While saying something under his breath the box began to melt. Yuki pulled his fingers apart and turned the box inside out. Then he clapped his hands together around the box. There was an absorbing silence that followed and he opened his hands to show nothing but air like a magic card trick when the card ended up in your sleeve.

“It’s painful, but they’ll never find it.” That moment Black saw a deep red smear on the palm of Yuki’s hand. Curious, he looked at the other and saw blood seeping out of a cut so deep he expected to see through to the back of the hand. Yuki dressed the wound like it was an involuntary response. Jaw gaping, Black agreed with Yuki’s previous assumption about his disbelief. ‘Ok this guy gets some credit. That was way cool,’ he applauded mentally, which only made him more curious about his destination.

 “Great marring,” Yuki continued, “will stand out under the aegis oculi.  And just so you know kid, very few people know this method even exists and fewer can achieve it,” he paused. “We’ve wasted enough time already, we need to move. I’ll even tell you why. We are in one of many antechambers. This room is where you may purchase a locker,” he directed, pointing at some heavy metal doors on the sides of the walls. Black had not noticed those before. “Almost anything of this sphere cannot be taken to the other, vice versa. I take what I want where I want. With that Yuki went over to a chest next to some lockers opened it and started rummaging.

“You didn’t tell me why.”

“Eh, so I didn’t. Here put these on.” In Yuki’s arms was a bundle of interesting looking cloth.

“No way!”

“You’re going to wish you did.”

“Yeah I’m sure I will big guy.”

“Alright kid,” Yuki chuckled. “You know best. Come on, time to go.”

Wednesday, February 22, 2012

Pantheon Chapter 13: Wisdom (Great Library of Alexandria excerpt)

Egyptian sun shone down on Black threatening a burn. Black tucked the map away into his box neatly, trying to will Evo’s fun facts out of the air. Perched on an outcropping of volcanic rock they surveyed their landing. They were confined to a ledge, hugged by jagged cliffs on three sides and ocean on the fourth. Making effective use of his cast Black was careful to avoid lacerations from the sharp rock as he poked his head over the top. The promontory revealed itself as an island bearing no prospects of further progress.

Black likened its size to about half of a ‘football field.’ Evo wrinkled his forehead, whinnied, and muttered “Terrene” under his breath. Black heard him perfectly and for brief moment, recalling the untidy sports store in Capriis, he wondered if there was anything like football here.

More pressing riddles begged to be relinquished and they scoured the smallish platform for some way off. It was clearly a manmade ledge carved into the rock but there was no sign of it having any purpose.

There was nowhere to go.

 “Where are we?” groaned Evo. “You were supposed to take us to Alexandria.”

“I did. We are, look.”

Black held the map out to Evo. The marker changed what it said as Evo took it. There, right above the dot where Alexandria was it read Evyndyr.

Shrouded behind igneous formations Evo wasn’t able to lift his neck high enough to see the skyline of Alexandria. The boat-speckled harbor of the golden city could be heard however now that it was at the forefront of his awareness.

 “Well,” Evo joked, “Either we wait for some cruise ship to rescue us or we see what that map can do for us.”

It didn’t work.

“Um,” tried Black, “I didn’t throw away my flying carpet.”

“Yeah, but this is a no-fly zone and Egyptian prison is my second least favorite place to spend a night.”

“No look.” Black had started to say, pointing to a small pile of debris cuddling the serrated shore of their little island. Suddenly curious of what else was on Evo’s list, he wished he hadn’t spoken so soon. Likewise Evo regretted the anecdote and took the conversational back door away from recollecting undesirable memories.

“Oh, I thought for a moment that it was a boat.”

“It is a boat.” Black argued.

A small reed boat was tied to a slender boulder that had been placed on the flat shelf.

“That’s not a boat!” Evo snorted. “It’s a pile of broken reeds wash-“

“Oh shut up, it’s a boat and it’s even got oars. We’ll just have to paddle our way in.”

“Not that I am trying to get out of paddling a dilapidated life raft to shore, cause I’m not,” stammered Evo. “I honestly don’t think I’ll even fit in that thing and keep it afloat at the same time. And we’ve got to row through all the other traffic. It’s suicide. If we tip over we die.”

“What you can’t swim?”

“No, there’s-”

“I spent a summer one time on a boat, just do as I say and we’ll be fine. No sudden moves horsefoot.”

Evo decided not to get into it. They were out of options and camping on that ledge was almost as dangerous anyway. He didn’t see the need though to pressure Black’s nautical knowhow with that information and he conceded.

Evo’s adrenaline rushed through him as he concentrated hard on keeping the boat steady. Rowing to shore through the phalanx of vessels between was certain doom, but swimming was suicide. All the while Black poked fun unknowledgeable of the danger in the water.

Stroke by stroke they rounded the island and faced the commanding skyline of Alexandria. The city was not made of gold as its nickname stated but rather yellowish sandstone. It was impossible magic that kept block after block of tall sandstone skyscrapers standing. Like a mirage, the hot sun reflected off of a mirror sea.

The city shimmered and rippled before them, the great lighthouse beckoning them in. Black stared in awe at a wall of unfathomably tall superstructures that dwarfed it. Even though he had been here many times Evo couldn’t help but join in the reverence when they had passed the breakers. Atop the maritime entrance to the city an enormous statue stood proud, a legendary hero.

A colossus, erected in honor of Gilgamesh, greater even than the original colossus at Rhodes celebrated the champion of the world’s first epic. Evo couldn’t help but explain that the effigy in Rhodes however was the original great colossus and more wondrous because it was built without the aid of magic.

The Alexandrian skyline had not rendered a single holy cow. Their utterly silent awe, broken only by Evo’s tour guide knowledge was a venerable reverence fit for the Manhattan of the Mediterranean. Ancient looking, gravity defying, skyscrapers of heavy yellow stone seemed to pierce the stratosphere. The skyline looked as though the ancient Egyptians had built their version of New York City. Greater than the pyramids or the temple at Carnac, these buildings put to shame any others he had ever seen. Las Vegas certainly didn’t have the tallest building in the world but Black had known them to be grand. Now his memory of them seemed pathetic. Just a few weeks ago modern engineering was king. Now magical superstructures trumped over modern technology.

Black wondered how the tallest of these would measure up against the two towers. Those were the tallest buildings Black could name, but even if they weren’t as tall they certainly were just as imposing. Black nearly lost his balance and tipped the skiff. Evo shrieked like a small child but regained proper footing.

He was now breathing too heavy to reproach Black, who laughed jovially and ignorantly. Evo strained himself working superior levitation magic. He was nearly exhausted and panicked.

Black was absorbed into getting the most out of his oar strokes that he failed to see where he was going. The bow shot up out of the water and sea spray coated their front sides. A fearful moment of near capsizing in the crossing wakes of larger boats Evo pleaded for passage with a nearby by garbage barge. It was empty and on its way toward the city.

‘Watch where you’re going!” Evo roared as the barge slowly approached.

“Me? I’m the one doing all the work.” Black shouted back.

“So, you think you’re the one keeping us afloat?”

“Like you are. You’re the one just standing there complaining.”

“I’ve been levitating this rotting piece of junk the whole way. And all the while keeping the eels distracted.”

“You-” Black stopped short. “Wait, what?”

But before Evo could explain the barge had approached. The solid mass underfoot was welcome despite the reeking stench. They deflected the curious pilot’s puzzlement well enough and slowly floated nearer the shore.

Their argument was dropped and sank like a heavy stone into the harbor just as quickly as their little reed boat had done. In its place Evo put on a false voice and guided their tour.

The barge’s horn hollered a low welcome as they passed around what Evo explained was a massive boat station. Rather than subways they had underground canals with ferrymen guiding long reed boats with poles. It seemed to Black like a cross between a singing and dancing theme park ride and Venice. But Evo didn’t understand a word or what Black was talking about. Black couldn’t help but sing “it’s a small world after all,” the rest of the way in.

"Wow what’s that building?" asked Black after they hopped ashore and thanked the garbage man.

"That,” Evo speculated, “looks like a huge glass, wait a sec. That the new addition to the library. Wow is right. It’s incredible. I heard it was neat but this is amazing."

Towering out of the ocean was a triangular shaped glass wall, pointing to the sky. The entire structure looked solid, like it was one gigantic piece of glass or crystal. The absence of individual panes and supporting crossbeams gave it and unusual and ghostly appearance. Black thought of a giant moon-sized diamond exploding in space and a chunk of it falling and nestling itself into the Alexandrian coast.

"It looks like a-"

"Yeah it's a glass pyramid turned on its side, look you can see inside. There on the far end, there’s where the top of the pyramid would be if it was right side up." Evo pointed to water where it gently lapped against the side of the crystal clear wall. "It goes down just as far.

Through the wall Black could see there were numerous balconies inside stacked with countless shelves and display cases, all glowing slightly of an ethereal sky blue. They followed the boardwalk along the coast towards the building.

“So that’s it then,” exclaimed Evo.

All Black could muster by way of reply was a fairly disjointed double “whoa.”

“That’s the ethereal section. It’s new, just finished about a year or so ago.”

“What’s that mean, ethereal section?”

“It’s a new concept. I read an article about it. It’s supposed to replace all the current library systems. No more damaged, lost or stolen books. No more late fees. No hungry books eating your stuff either.”

The blank stare from Blacks face still had questions written all over it and Evo noticed.

“All the actual books are now kept in sealed glass cases. When you find a book you want you simply touch the case in front of the book and an ethereal copy will emerge for you to take.”
“Sounds cool but what’s ethereal mean?”

“Oh, it’s like, like a ghost only backwards. Typically ghosts are not usually visible or palpable but they’re real, something ethereal is something you can see and touch but it’s not real and will soon fade.”

“So it’s like a hologram then?”

“A hollow what?”

“A hologram you know, as in an illusion.”

“I thought you were talking about crackers, isn’t that what a graham is?”

“Not hollow, holo, h-o-l-o. And a different kind of gram, not like, oh never mind, just forget it.”

“Ok, easy enough, you weren’t making any sense. Anyway when you take an ethereal book you can have it as long as you want, or well as long as it lasts. They die after a while you know.”

“I thought you said they weren’t real, how can they die?”

“Fine they don’t die they disappear, run out of chi, whatever, everyone calls it dying, like your music thingy. They fade after time or if you take them far enough away from the library, away from their source of power. Ah here we are,” Evo happily announced and ended the conversation before any more questions could be raised.

They stood on the pier, the glass pyramid towering above them. It was unlike any glass Black had ever seen. It looked so thin and clear and astonishingly it was made of one solid piece, not just each side but the whole structure was solid and seamless. The building was remarkable but partly due to its transparency, subtracted nothing from the many other buildings on the site. As they walked around the ethereal section they saw it was connected to the back end of the central edifice, the library proper.

Evo explained that the original word for the library, bibliotheca, referred to the collection of scrolls itself not to the buildings housing them but in Atlantean and most other modern Gaiean languages the word was like the English library. He went on to tell Black that over time the library had grown as a center for learning and the arts of magic and thus became more of a university than a just a house for books. It was now also sometimes known as the great university of Alexandria.

 “In fact,” he continued, “it’s got a lot more names depending on where in the world you are, but they’re all more or less the same thing. Most of the world’s greatest thinkers have once studied here.”

The entrance to the library was more inland and the turned off the boardwalk. Evo led Black onto the complex and around the corner of an archaic sandstone building and under a great hallway of columns. They entered an open courtyard, the ancient library façade on the north. Another colonnade like the one they had just passed through was opposite them on the far end. That left a huge circular building or cistern of some kind occupying the remaining side of the square.

Black was sure Evo was about to spit out another interesting fact but for the moment the grandeur of the original structure, the Great Library of Alexandria had the floor. The library, like most of the city was built primarily of the yellowish stone. Various other stones used in the carvings, inlays and reliefs gave it a high level of detail. It was ancient but sturdy.

“Not bad eh?” chirped Evo.

Crowning the steps that led up to the entrance, Black gazed at the white marble artfully set into the threshold. The stone looked as if it were spilled milk, leaking out from inside the library. Large twin statues of Atlas stood on raised platforms on either side of the stairs. Instead of the celestial sphere on the titan’s shoulders Atlas held big brass braziers blazing with pure white flame.

“They symbolize that the weight of the heavens is lifted by knowledge. Don’t tell Atlas though.” Evo laughed. “Those braziers still look plenty heavy.”

“Not bad at all,” Black proposed as they moved up the steps. “I mean for a library.”

Monstrous doors gaping wide were open and inviting. They had been coated with gold leaf giving way to the white floors inside. It probably had some sort of symbolic tie in to Atlas’s heavenly flames. Black rushed in, nearly leaping. He considered for a brief moment becoming an architect. At this he shuddered, made the kind of face one makes when biting into a fruit that’s entirely unripe and stripped himself of the thought. He let himself become distracted by all the people there.

Most people moved lazily around a vast circular entrance hall taking it all in. It was bright and had the scent of any old museum. The musty waft of old deteriorating parchment and preservative ointments dominated the air. Streams of incense and other fragrances mingled delightfully with the ancient book smell and the breeze from the sea would come in periodically like waves to freshen the senses temporarily.

It was like all particles in the air were laden with an aroma, every one of them had somewhere to be. Mixing perfectly in a grand chaos, like ants when you kick their hill. But there were also bits of space in the library void and sterile. Like spears barring down into the nest, rays of light shone from a focal point above to the floor. What portion of the air that wasn’t occupied by one scent or another was inhabited by these near tangible lights beaming down from the domed ceiling.

Black made to swipe his hand through one and was surprised. Minutely the air was different, it was thicker. Tenderly he ran his fingers along the edges of the light. He could easily pass hid hand through it but he could feel a surface. It reminded him of holding his hand out of a car window and feeling in his cupped hand like he is holding an invisible ball.

Nestled in the crest of the circular ceiling smothered by a circular fresco adorned every inch of the cupola was a diamond or some other crystal larger than any Black had ever seen. The mural was definitely a grand myth or epic of some kind, one Black didn’t recognize off hand. It reminded Black of one of those ninja turtle named renaissance artists, except instead of naked babies everywhere there were pegasi and mermaids.

. From the elephantine jewel projected the pillars of light that illuminated the spacious rotunda. Black moved around and fondled the 3D image that they cast onto the ground.

“The world’s largest crystallight calendar.” Although Evo was in no way responsible for its existence his voice carried an air of pride.

The rays from the gem created translucent statues of light arranged in several rings on the marble floor. Displaying the Date, time, season, month, moon phase, and a few other things Black didn’t understand.
It was spectacular.

 Black began to mentally compare it to every image of any library or museum he had seen, none of which could measure up to the grandiose of Alexandria’s great library. This was majestic, it was amazing. The ceiling seemed to be ridiculously taller than it had been on the outside, a building quality that he was getting used to. The stonework was intricate and detailed beyond normal human ability. The materials were exquisite and perfect. Black had no doubt that the magic enchanting the buildings’ size and the great crystallight calendar, were world class. Black found out it was the year 1467 after the rule of the thirteen houses. The moon was somewhere close to the first quarter and Libra was the current zodiac being passed by the sun.

“Well let’s get you a library card shall we?” Evo suggested.

“All this magic and you use library cards? Wait, how’s that work without technology?”

“Well we don’t actually have library cards in Gaia. I’m kidding, I just always thought they were cool.”

“Oh, well what do you have?”

“Permission from the gods.”

Tuesday, December 27, 2011

Pantheon Ch 10: The capitol of the World: Excerpt

-----a little excerpt form chapter 10: The Capitol of the World. i just finished editing this to its second draft version. it takes place at the royal palace in a city called capriis, located right on the north rim of the grand canyon, in a magical world called gaia. Black is to travel to Camelot, by way of Atlantis, in order to vandalize the round table. Evo is his centaur mentor.-----



He skipped over steps, spinning downward so briskly that he hadn’t heard the soft footfalls of the servant with whom he collided.

“Master Black,” The royal attendant addressed him with perfect composure as they regained their footing at the base of the tower.

“My bad,” Black chirped.

“Good to see you awake already. Empress Xu has requested I wake you and send you to the kitchen for breakfast.”

“Oh, um, which way?”

The servant gave Black clear and precise directions. His informative nature also led him to explain that the royal family, for their children’s sake, liked to cook and eat together, casually in the kitchen as often as their busy schedules allowed.

“Thanks.”

Black followed the prescribed route, however tempted to deviate by a few rooms that he passed. He made his way to the kitchen, the smell of bacon or something similar enough kept him on track.

Rounding the last bend, he found the source. Working at what looked like a gas stove without any knobs, the emperor’s wife stood frying pan in hand. Long dark-red hair bounced like ribbons down her slender figure. Her olive skin had a sort of grainy wood-like appearance. Black clamped his eyelids together trying to force out whatever slumber might still enduring between them. There wasn’t any, especially after his tumble. The Empress had a dreamy ethereal quality to her. Optical sensors in check, Black thought that he was definitely looking at an alien.

“I’m half Oread. That’s a mountain and valley nymph, if that’s what you’re wondering. Don’t worry I know all about where you’re from. You’re not the first person from Terrene to pass through these walls you know.” Her demeanor was playful with a child-like tone, but her body language was grace incarnate. She was calming to listen to.

“Echo,” she sang. Hands precisely gestured her name. “And of course, Black,” emerald eyes angled downward at him, her trunk swaying ever so slightly in a welcoming gesture,

“Yeah, that’s me.” his lips sleepily rolled the word out as the rest of his senses were distracted by the sizzling on the nearest burner. “What smells so good?”

“Breakfast,” the Empress smiled. “Bacon, you have that in Terrene I hope. I can’t imagine a world without bacon?”

“Yeah of course we do but isn’t that like some sort of special magic flying pig bacon or something?”

“No,” she chuckled, “just regular bacon from a normal pig.”

“Well, it smells magical.”

“Thank you. Here, why don’t you help make sure these don’t burn while I check on the cactus rolls.”

Black poked and prodded the crackling meat haphazardly as he puzzled over the peculiar situation. Acclimated to awkward introductions, foster parents who stumbled through tours of their own homes, and non-siblings’ erratic behavior, Black awed over the Empress’ inviting calm.

“We have some visitors this morning,” she announced, “the recently widowed Cailleach and her son Collin.”

Black’s flat expression slowly declined as he realized the implication of this new development.

“I,” he held the note for a brief moment before delivering the rest of his short refrain, “lost my appetite.”

Echo was more reasonable than Black expected. She not only excused him from breakfast, she sent him on his way with a hearty helping.

“I want you to know,” she encouraged, “that if you need anything, just plainly ask, whatever it is.”

“Cailleach and Collin came to tell you that they don’t hold you responsible. Nor do they harbor any ill will toward you. Black,” she focused her attention solely on the teen. Black stood there frowning from behind his hoodie. “They forgive you. In fact they don’t feel like there’s anything to forgive, it wasn’t your fault.”

“If you’re not ready to meet them, just take some bacon. You know what they say about diving and drachmae. Oh,” She paused, allowing a piece of bacon to become unfairly crispier than the rest, “You don’t. The saying is: don’t dip in the Acheron without any oboli.”

Despite not registering a bit of the old Greek adage, he understood, by the tone of her voice and the glow in her green eyes, that she meant for him to do what felt right. Black had no desire for a meeting with the victims of recent events. Glad of her understanding, hunger subdued for the time being and content with the lush gardens, Black strolled across the grounds while the other half of his two man team took a freakishly long time to pack.

Black had virtually no luggage thanks to his magical box, but wanting it to remain beneath the servants’ attention he had to unpack many of his belongings and repack them into normal bags. During the broken conversation they carried between loads of provisions and second sweeps for anything left behind, Black caught wind of something called an ayotl. No one there explained to him what an ayotl was but Black and Evo were evidentially going to Atlantis in one.

First they would have to cross the canyon, bridge by bridge by way of horse drawn carriage toward the ayotl port. Apparantly it was some kind of land-harbor for creatures fit for mass transit to the other side of the continent. He made himself comfortable inside the kingly carriage and blankly examined the velvet cushions and gold leaf trimmings. The windows were covered by unrolled curtains and Black briefly despised them for robbing his view.

Evo who couldn’t fit, had to trot alongside. Emperor Xu had requested Black read the story of how Capriis was saved from drought through an appeal to several gods of various bodies of water.

Black had already read this passage but as he wanted to distance himself from conversation however he employed his nose with smelling the fresh pages.

The book rehearsed the tale of Poseidon and his rewarding of heroic deeds, desperate pleas and sacrifice with the fountain that now stood at the city’s center. ‘It continues to provide,’ the historian relayed, ‘a pure everlasting spring for all the inhabitants of Capriis.’

The trip to the land-port was short and anticlimactically uneventful. Black was nearly finished with the tale as their personal bellhops began unloading the coach. With that page still in his remembrance, Black’s mind wandered to Atlantis. Hadn’t he heard somewhere that Poseidon was connected with that place somehow?

His thoughts of course didn’t ponder the subject long before entreating the prospect of a meeting there. Notions soared instantly, like his brain had a magical map of its own, to Heythabyr and fixated on the girl with the blue eyes. It was even enough to push the impending task and warnings of danger from his mind.

No idea where he had left off reading Black pretended to finish just in time considering how it had been the perfect excuse not to have to help with any luggage, or listen to Evo yammer on about the significance of Echo’s proverb. Evo had even made sure to add current information about price hikes of Charon’s death toll and complain about how the river Styx is all the rage these days instead of the traditional Acheron. Had he been talking this whole time?

 “The point is…” Evo explained to himself at the side of the coach, also trying not to move his fair share of the luggage, even if all of it was his. Black closed the book with a thump and pulled himself from the wagon. He easily tuned Evo out as he set out to discover just what an ayotl was.

It took a few moments for Black to be sure of what he was looking at. Dwarfing the hills around them was the colossal herd of tortoises like a small mountain range giving the landscape form.  There were tortoises departing and arriving in a spacious field. Each had rows of tiny holes on its shell where people were going in or out of the hollow undershell.

Other animals skittered, screeched and scurried between, around and above them carrying out countless tasks. Some flew off carrying passengers and others trotted away alone. Creatures of all sorts bound for exotic destinations began their journeys while others greeted new arrivals. An incredible variety of mobile creatures were domesticated and employed for transportation on both massive and small scales. For further travel Black was informed passengers could connect to similarly colossal sea turtles, in addition to the conventional boat. It was like a living airport and Evo pointed directly to their particular flight.

As they approached the gargantuan reptile by the sign labeled “Brenda,” Black found his legs grow heavier. His pace slowed in a subconscious refusal toward the incredible. It felt like some movie from a distance but the closer he got to boarding a giant turtle the more real the experience felt. The tortoise resembled a major airlines’ largest passenger jet more than it did an animal, in fact, Black thought, it would probably eat jumbo jets given the chance. As he pondered, the possibilities of a terrifying beast this size carrying hundreds of passengers across great distances safely, boggled his mind. Then the question of what it ate popped in his head.

Black’s thought process was jammed. Several comments pushed their way to the surface each wanting to be said. Instead the passengers were all cramming into the doorway wanting to be seated and Black just stood and mumbled a little bit. Questions and exclamations fought a small battle aided by disbelief and wonder. Everything from ‘holy crap’ to ‘no way am I getting in that thing’ crossed his lips but in the end his newly sparked thirst for knowledge pushed out the victorious comment, a single word. “How?”

Teasing, Evo responded also with only one word. “Magic.”

Black’s jaw opened and shut again silently. He decided it might be best not to think and simply enjoy their first class cabin, fully furnished and partitioned off from the rest of the frequent flyer’s section.

Having a few relatively uneventful days did wonders for Black’s nerves. He grew more accustomed to the idea of living in a wonderland with the passing of each hour. The first few days on the journey were long and ordinary apart from magic practice and sword fighting lessons, all of which took place with a centaur, on the top of a giant tortoise’s shell. They tried knocking each other off to the distant ground below. The first successful attempt showed Black that Evo wasn’t joking. Black had lost his footing against an overly aggressive thrust and slipped on some moss that grew in a small surface crack.

Tumbling toward the deadly crunch of the four massive columns beneath the creature, Black began spinning as Evo toyed with his knowledge and skill in levitation. To Evo’s dismay Black was not afraid of heights, but rather liked the rollercoaster daredevil feel of being levitated above imminent doom and fear of being trampled to death. Evo cancelled the lesson defeatedly as Black seemed to have fallen off on purpose.

Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Pantheon: Table of Contents

Chapter One: Gaia
Chapter Two: Beyond the Curtains
Chapter Three: Heist
Chapter Four: Reward
Chapter Five: High Tide
Chapter Six: Answers
Chapter Seven: Meetings
Chapter Eight: A New Life
Chapter Nine: Turtle-ing
Chapter Ten: The Capitol of the World
Chapter Eleven: The Relic of Ruta
Chapter Twelve: Seeking Illumination
Chapter Thirteen: Wisdom
Chapter Fourteen: Heads
Chapter Fifteen: The Guardian and the Garden
Chapter Sixteen: The Secrets of Lancelot
Chapter Seventeen: Wings
Chapter Eighteen: Familiar Faces
Chapter Nineteen: The Recycling Plant
Chapter Twenty: Horrors
Chapter Twenty One: The Day of the Dead


Epilogue TBD

Tuesday, December 13, 2011

Pantheon Chapter 1: Gaia (second/final draft) for feedback

Pantheon
Chapter One: Gaia

‘Keep alive,’ the orphan came with instructions. At five years old Richard was left on the porch as someone doorbell ditched the Las Vegas City fire department. Everyone who knew him since then, at some point, felt a desire to disobey the explicit command.

In ignorant defiance to the commotion all around him the young teenager stared out the high museum windows. Rainless, the tempest flickered in through and bounced off the marble floors, casting twisted split second shadows on the other delinquents as they were searched for contraband. From behind his black cheek-length hair Richard looked past the prison-like bars into the vacant sky, waiting for the stranger.

He smirked as the shaky hand of part-time justice dealt with the other delinquents. Richard had tricked the other boys into an excursion on the strip for game and glory. He had not met them as promised at the rendezvous point. Instead Richard, with a perfect diversion had made his way to the nearby campus to lift electronics off careless coeds and lazy bachelors.

‘Keep alive.’ All his life he wondered what kind of people would leave a note like that. ‘Weird old idiots,’ he concluded. Despite his unknown parentage the city declared Richard to be Caucasian. He never understood what that meant. No one ever offered a straight answer when he asked where Caucasia was. Adults either scolded his attitude or chuckled and ruffled his pitch hair. By now he had stopped asking questions, but there were always questions. Who was he? Where did he come from? Why was he just abandoned? Most importantly why couldn’t he remember? At fourteen or fifteen he knew he should still have memories of the fire station and before. The answers, like his parents, simply escaped him.

There were only the scattered mental images of constant migration between boy’s ranches and foster homes. Especially unhappy at his current middle-of-nowhere slave labor camp he considered running away. He hated the remoteness of the place. It was easier to cope alone in a crowd than feel like a sore thumb on guy with one hand. Thankful for the short field trip he was currently watching the windows of some smelly moth-ball museum in the heart of Las Vegas. 

It was late and dark outside. The chaperones scurried about in a worried frenzy over a few missing delinquents and the impending storm. Richard couldn’t help but laugh. He, the alleged “Ring Leader” of the nonconformists, had just been praised for his current presence. Richard smirked. If it weren’t for his compelling the other boys to try their luck on the Vegas strip he wouldn’t have the brand new mp3 player in his pocket, and they were the ones to take the heat. What use were some vacationer’s credit cards anyway? A few chips were nothing to him in the middle of a go-nowhere boys ranch compared to eighty gigabytes of free music, courtesy of some unattended backpack at the nearby college lab.

Repressing disgust for the various exhibits and displays around him, Richard had made himself comfortable in a corner with a particularly nice stone wall on which to lean. Concealing perfectly, coupled with his new hooded sweatshirt, his tan face and the surprisingly snug headphones. He made sure his music was loud enough that he didn’t have to hear the adults arguing.

“Have you questioned Rich-“

“A million and a half times. He said they mentioned the strip.”

“There’s no way we can make it back in this weather.”

“Yes we can, it’s not even raining and the news reports-”

“But if it starts, the road will be too muddy for this bus and since when has the news ever been right?”

“What are you saying, that we spend the night here?”

“If it comes to it, with the boys and all I’d rather spend the night here than stuck on some dirt road halfway to the ranch.”

The adults’ argument was masked by screeching guitars, drums, and the latest electronic bleeps.

Richard, that was what they named him. Sometimes, the more annoying tried their luck with Richie, but anyone who knew better called him Black. The children often used made up names. It was his favorite color, his dress code and coincidentally his hair was as dark as a moonless midnight. He liked it so much that he went so far as to dye his already black hair just to make it look deliberate.

 Black was both Richard’s title and surname as he saw it. He was the black sheep of the Lost Vegas boys. No foster family kept him. Valiant couples saw Black as a parenting challenge or as their divine project. Embracing rejection, he never let them tame him. Although he liked the foster homes best, he got sick of them quickly. Sooner or later he always bounced back to the state, and he preferred it that way, not that he liked the state itself, but Nevada nags a lot less than would-be-mothers on a mission. The better they got to know him the more they tried to “help” him. Above all he didn’t like the feeling that he belonged anywhere. He needed to keep moving.

Standing in the corner ignoring the world around him he was simply indifferent like nothing affected him. He thought of himself as a shadow, only frightening if you fear it. Patient and tactful he was only cutthroat if provoked.

The other boys’ return cued Black’s volume finger, as he watched the silent scene, music now blasting louder than before. Black did regret that he had not seen their faces when they fruitlessly searched for him on the strip. The mental movie played out in his mind, the boys found the strip and no Black. They would look for hours before getting caught by angry social workers and dragged back to the museum. Their play time utterly wasted they were now being tried and sentenced. They would later tell Black, who had a superb alibi for not meeting them where he promised, that he was lucky he wasn’t caught, and he’d just shrug. He kept the volume up, the mental movie was good enough, and providentially the mp3 player was absolutely loaded with everything he liked.

After the public reprimand the group was admonished to “go one last time.” Black continued leaning like a lazy sentinel as the rest of the crew filtered in and out of the bathroom, legs crossed and arms folded. Some other boys approached him, curious to know of his exploits. Black was revered for his ability to attain certain forbidden articles. Negotiating his way out of the ranch as often as possible, every trip to the city was a chance to practice his art as the remote desert kept the children in the ranch.

Unfearing retaliation, he shooed them all away. Last field trip proved that none were willing to rat him out when staff caught a boy with a portable video game device. Now, with a trip to the city, Black’s peer was anxious to have the confiscated device replaced with another newer gaming system.

“No deal,” he announced to the expectant fellow rancher. “You got nothing I want anymore.”

“But I-”

“You heard me, take a hike!”

With a particular waving motion of his hand Black ushered the other barterer away. In truth, for the first time, he wasn’t able to obtain the requested goods. Distracted during his collection run, a skinny long haired and scruffy man at the university had caught him rummaging through backpacks. Instead of capture the man had approached Black and offered change which he readily accepted.  Life off the grid, and a chance to learn professional thievery, packaged with the promise of never getting caught, ultimate freedom was all the enticing he needed to agree.

Black turned back towards the window. Tonight was the night he was leaving. He wondered why he hadn’t done it sooner. Free food and scarcity of cash were just excuses. But now he had met someone, someone different from the regular runaway or criminal.  This one was smarter.  Richard felt somehow he wouldn’t get killed or caught with him. He continued to watch the window.

Black stayed in that corner even after everyone was asleep. Outside, the flash and bangs worsening it was still dry in the city. The intensified lightning helped Black keep alert, now sitting against a wall in the designated corner of the museum’s entrance hall.

The museum was quiet, closed under care of security guards. Richard didn’t know how the stranger would come, but if he could it would serve as the proof that the stranger was telling the truth. With reservation, Black envisioned the epic jailbreak it would require, but the man seemed to know exactly how he would do it. It was all the same to him, he wasn’t going to challenge. Questions got people like him into trouble, not authority trouble but trouble with trouble itself.

Black waited for what only seemed like a few minutes, but could have been hours. He was too indifferent for time to get to him.

The moment finally came, quietly, unnoticed. The wall behind him began to grow warmer steadily under the cover of the storm’s humidity. Black shot up to his feet, back sweating. Half expecting to see that he had been sitting against a broken radiator he stepped away annoyed. Looking back, unflinching and stifling disbelief as a section of wall appeared to melt before his eyes. No one seemed to notice as a stranger stood alone in the opening, hair blowing on the edges of a hood. A black coat ran to the strangers’ knees.

“Black, we’re going.” The stranger beckoned with a follow-me motion and turned towards the night.  The air was filled with a cool storm breeze. Though lightning flashed the sky, still no rain fell in the city, there was only wind and shadow. As they strolled away from the outer walls of the museum Black saw the wall close up as if nothing had happened. To the rest of the world, that was the night Black disappeared.

Richard left all of his things in his backpack, even a few things he had stolen that looked valuable, he wanted to leave the impression that he simply vanished. He wanted them to wonder why he didn’t take anything with him. He thought about a suicide note but it seemed to him a mystery, the unknown, was more fitting. He just showed up one day and now he was simply gone.

Before returning to that museum that evening, just in case he was searched, he had stashed some of his other newly acquired goods in a hollow tree close by. Wanting to get them he asked the Stranger.

“Shut your mouth you. You can’t take it where we’re going anyway, and as much as I like practicing my English I’d rather you just shut up.” That seemed to be the end of the conversation.

It was all the same to Black. He was now envisioning walls melting all over the world. Glass display cases, vault doors and even prison bars in his mind disappeared effortlessly with each new imagined caper.

Descending into the deep shoulder of a freeway underpass the rushing of sixteen wheelers on a four lane highway fazed him back into reality. They stepped down into the ditch stopping at a metal grating guarding a drainage hole. The stranger touched it and it too melted. Black’s arm was grabbed and he was pulled to the hole.

“Get in!”

“You’re full of-“

“Get in yourself or it will hurt more when I stuff you down.”

Black nearly pulled out his knife but his better judgment took over and he cautiously climbed in. He was no match for a wall melter and whatever else the stranger was, nor did Black think it wise to find out presently. His feet hit a splashy ground that he didn’t know was coming so soon and he fell to one knee.

“Not bad kid. A natural faller. You might add up to something.”

“Thanks uh,” Black paused, “What’s your name anyway?”


“I guess you’re going to hear it sooner or later,” the slender man consented. “The name’s Yuki.” A meager offering he pressed onward.

After a little walk in pure darkness being pushed from behind by Yuki, Black saw a bright flash and instantly felt a sharp pain in his head.  When he came to he was laying in some rancid water next to a set of short wide steps. It took no time at all for his eyes to adjust to the dim light emanating but his surroundings were still unrecognizable. He started to look around trying not to seem awake.

Soon the darkness past the steps became an archway and there appeared a light. As the light drew nearer it grew a pair of arms and then a body, someone was holding the light, ‘Yuki that backstabber!’

“Sorry kid, it was necessary, would have been mounds of trouble. We’re there now so get up.”

As Black got to his feet he opened his mouth but was cut off.

“Just shut up and listen. I need to know everything you have on you, down to every little hairpin and piece of string. Put it on the table or it’ll be your head.”

“What the-“

“Do it now and don’t make me ask again.”

Black started emptying his pockets and Yuki barked “Everything.”  He didn’t have much, a small stiletto and a big hunting knife. There was a little utility piece that consisted of a miniature compass and a lock pick and a few other little pocket knife type tools. There was a little cash and a lighter. Black wasn’t about to hand over the new mp3 player he had just recently adopted.

“If that’s not everything you’ll be dead or in prison in less than an hour, and believe me you won’t like this sort of prison.”

Black subdued a few nerves that started to perk up, having kept his mp3 player from Yuki’s grasp. A few seconds pause, but minutes calmer, he pulled off his left shoe. He took out the insole and then withdrew a thin piece of metal with a nasty spike on the end. There were a few holes in the piece, a skinny pair of steel knuckles. A butterfly knife came from the hollow sole his right shoe.

“Do you have any necklaces or jewelry?”

“No.”

“Really? No piercings?”

A ring and a bar went from his lip and tongue to the table.

“Happy?”

“Don’t get smart, ant.” Yuki smirked as he pulled something out of a coat pocket. It was a small black and brown box with a square hole in one end. He held it so that the hole faced outwards and took few steps over to the table. Light in one hand, box in the other, he lowered them both to the table. Yuki touched the hole-side of the box to the first knife, the stiletto. It melted and disappeared, then the butterfly. Everything black had melted and disappeared until the large hunting knife was the only thing on the table. “This is ugly, besides it won’t be much good to you anymore.”

Black stood there with a protest deep in his throat. Not knowing what to say as Yuki seemed to materialize a white chalky disc from nowhere. Yuki picked up the knife and tapped it to the disc. The blade turned to dust and was sucked into the disc. Black stood in awe, that disk was solid no mistake, yet it sucked the dust into it.

“No more questions squirt?”

Black dared, opening his mouth-

“Good, stay shut up, you’ll live longer.”

“No,” Black complained, “I need some information. You choose what you’re going to tell me, it won’t matter what I ask, but you tell me something before you or I make another move.”

With a wide still hooded grin, Yuki retorted almost sinisterly, “Ok kid, you’ve earned it, but keep your shorts on. I work in a little different line of smuggling than you think. This is a border unlike any you’ve ever seen, and I always have plenty of tricks up my sleeve. This box is a smugglers hole.  It can store huge amounts of just about anything, even someone unconscious. How’s your head by the way?”

“You put me…that’s-“


“That’s what, impossible? Or magic? Ha, kid, keep your eyes open.” With that Yuki touched the side of the box, stroked the corner, closed his eyes, and pulled a three foot long sword out of the box. “This, my friend, once belonged to a man named Gilgamesh,” his proud announcement was met with a blank stare. “Don’t know your history eh?” He traced the box, and closing his eyes Yuki then pulled out “something you might have heard of, the staff of Merlin. And this,” he boasted as he pulled a third time, “is the helm of Hades, worn and lost by Perseus.”

Something about the last item rang a bell but the name to which the staff belonged he knew. “So what?”

“So what?” Yuki repeated in disbelief. “These artifacts are hundreds of years old and worth a fortune, but the point is this box can hold just about anything you want. I put you in there. On our way down here in the tunnels I heard voices. There’s never any way to know who a voice in the dark belongs to so I stuffed you in here. It’s easier to defend myself alone, and smuggling extremely rare and expensive artifacts requires serious skill, especially where we’re going, so I don’t need you screwing it up!”

“So where are we going?”

“Nowhere that you would believe. Now, it’s easy to hide anything in the box. It’s the box itself that takes some effort in hiding. There’s a few ways to do it, you can make it appear to be something it’s not.” He illustrated, somehow turning the box into a scarf.  “It doesn’t always last long and there are rarely any options since you can’t take anything with you to this place.” The scarf turned back to a box. “Clothing is a number one suspect for hiding things by the way, so it won’t work here. Or you can try to dilute it into the air,” he did not demonstrate, “an easy thing to do but very unreliable. The chances of finding it are slim, the chances of being able to get it back are slim, and the chances of it being detected are not so slim, but the feat is the easiest to perform.

A third option, my personal preference; reversing the magic of the box on itself, much the same as melting it into air but a little more specific. With a little magical skill and tolerance for pain you can melt it into yourself.” He stared at the box for a minute or two then jammed two of his fingers in the hole. While saying something under his breath the box began to melt. Yuki pulled his fingers apart and turned the box inside out. Then he clapped his hands together around the box. There was an absorbing silence that followed and he opened his hands to show nothing but air like a magic card trick when the card ended up in your sleeve.

“It’s painful, but they’ll never find it.” That moment Black saw a deep red smear on the palm of Yuki’s hand. Curious, he looked at the other and saw blood seeping out of a cut so deep he expected to see through to the back of the hand. Yuki dressed the wound like it was an involuntary response. Jaw gaping, Black agreed with Yuki’s previous assumption about his disbelief. ‘Ok this guy gets some credit. That was way cool,’ he applauded mentally, which only made him more curious about his destination.

 “Great marring,” Yuki continued, “will stand out under the Aegis Oculi.  And just so you know kid very few people know this method even exists and fewer can achieve it,” he paused, “we’ve wasted enough time already, we need to move. I’ll even tell you why. We are in one of many antechambers. This room is where you may purchase a locker,” he directed, pointing at some heavy metal doors on the sides of the walls. Black had not noticed those before. “Almost anything of this sphere cannot be taken to the other, vice versa. I take what I want where I want. With that Yuki went over to a chest next to some lockers opened it and started rummaging.

“You didn’t tell me why.”

“Eh, so I didn’t. Here put these on.” In Yuki’s arms was a bundle of interesting looking cloth.

“No way!”

“You’re going to wish you did.”

“Yeah I’m sure I will big guy.”

“Alright kid,” Yuki chuckled. “You know best. Come on, time to go.”